Wednesday, May 5, 2010

The Elves of Cintra / Terry Brooks

The Elves of Cintra

category: fantasy, author:

Terry Brooks

book 2 of Genesis of Shannara
published by Orbit, original copyright 2007, read in May 2010

Agamedes' opinion: 6 out of 10

The first three books of Brooks' Word and Void series are, really, unremittingly gloomy. Sure, they end "satisfactorily" but you just know -- from the basic premise of the series -- that worse is yet to come. By linking the Word and Void series to the many Shannara books Brooks has managed to inject some optimism into the linking Genesis books.

Yes, the world is ruined. But we know that a reasonable world -- Shannara -- will rise from the ashes. Eventually.

On its own, The Elves of Cintra is not too bad. A bit episodic, partly due to to the multiple threads of separate adventures being followed. The short episode with the robots, though, seems to have no relevance whatsoever -- except, I guess, as an introduction to, an excuse for, some robots which appear in one of the "future" Shannara books. Distracting, really, since the robots have no further impact on this story.

Still, the good guys advance their various adventures and reach satisfactory conclusions. I appreciate the fact that yes, there are still challenges to be overcome, but Brooks avoids leaving the heroes in serious cliffhanger situations.

One aspect of this book that I do not like, is that the heroes are close to being merely protagonists... The last book that I read was one of the Dresden Files, White Night. Harry Dresden is a true "hero": he plans, he thinks, he acts deliberately. Suspense is maintained by the author not revealing some of the plans. Brooks' characters, however, do not really seem to plan:

Several characters in The Elves of Cintra are essential to moving the various plots forward. None of them, however, seem to know what is going on. Well, it's not quite that bad. But they do seem to drift a lot, to move forward based on feelings rather than thoughts. Kirisin the elf, for example, barely has a plan in mind. He drifts along, following the urgings of other goodies and the schemings of baddies. When he needs to use his developing magic, he seems to think, Oh well, better try to do something... and... something happens.

This let's-just-see-what-happens approach is common. It may amaze the reader. It also makers the fantasy seem even less believable.

It would really be quite nice if people did things for a well thought out purpose. Or at least for the best of deliberate intentions. The strongest motivation is, apparently, "The Word" -- the mystic super-power which directs the forces for good. "I should do this," thinks the good guy, "Because The Word says that I should." What happened to free will? What happened to human (or elf) independence? Ah well...

The book is worth reading. I look forward to reading the third and (I hope) final Genesis novel, just to see what happens.

Action rather than tension. Tough guys and nice guys but very few sympathetic characters. Worth reading, but not great.


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Monday, May 3, 2010

White Night / Jim Butcher

White Night

category: fantasy, action, author:

Jim Butcher

book 9 of the Dresden Files
published by Orbit, original copyright 2007, read in May 2010

Agamedes' opinion: 8 out of 10

It's great fun watching this author develop his skills. Actually, I just checked his website... Butcher has written Dresden Files books (twelve, now) -- plus ten or so other books. So the skill development is not just through the Dresden books that I've read. Too bad! I comment only on what I've read:-)

So, it's great to watch Butcher develop his skills. An earlier book had every chapter ending with, "Oh no it looks as though I'm doomed!" The next chapter would start, "With a final burst of magical energy, I used an amazing new spell to escape..." Butcher still likes his cliff-hangers -- but, in White Night, they are a bit more subtle! Except for the combination of cliff-hanger and flashback:

One of the earlier Dresden books used flashback, very effectively. There were hints of past battles -- which could well have been references to past books. The flashback revealed all -- at an appropriate moment -- without interrupting the flow of action. White Night uses a similar flashback technique... except that the flashback occurs just as the hero has said, "Oh no it looks as though I'm doomed!" Sure, it revealed essential information. But it was a bit of an unsubtle and overworked cliffhanger.

Then there's the title of the book; it has me a little confused. White Night. Ah! wait! now I see it! Of course!

Harry Dresden is a wizard, in modern-day Chicago. In White Night, he battles -- I had overlooked the obvious! -- he battles the vampires of the White Court! Vampires of the White Court kill you with pleasure, Red Court prefers misery, Black Court work on the agony angle. So this book is about the battle, possibly at night, of Harry & friends -- and the White Court.

And, as with other books in the series, the title is a pun.

Harry is a nice guy. Tough, but nice. Protector of the weak, defender of the innocent, always ready to help a damsel in distress. In White Night, Harry helps protect a whole coven of wiccan witches: sweet & cheerful ladies with only minor magical powers. A sort of sewing circle with cup cakes and candles, altars, magical wards and a nice, hot cup of tea.

Harry the hero rushes in -- like a white knight, of course! -- to save these (possibly) damsels in distress. Also convinces an evil spirit to become good, demonstrates that he is still true to his one true love, and wipes the floor with the very vicious ghouls.

Yes, this book has a strong theme of Harry the white knight hero. Yes, there is non-stop magical action -- backed up by plenty of non-magical bullets and bombs. Yes, there is a solid plot, gradual discovery of means and motives, a hint of sex, lots of good versus evil action and violence. Yes, there is humour, heroics and a good side to nearly everyone...

Yes, this is another, great, Dresden Files novel!


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Friday, April 30, 2010

PissWeakly: the Index

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The Agamedes Rating -- out of Ten

  • rating:10 absolutely terrific! (saved for Lord of the Rings)
  • rating:09 really, really good
  • rating:08 really quite good
  • rating:07 well worth reading
  • rating:06 read to pass the time
  • rating:05 readable, but only if there's nothing else
  • rating:04 bad but could be read
  • rating:03 so bad it's embarrassing
  • rating:02 unreadably bad
  • rating:01 surely nothing is this bad... so far

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State of Fear / Michael Crichton

State of Fear

category: science fiction, author:

Michael Crichton

published by HarperCollins, original copyright 2004, read in April 2010

Agamedes' opinion: 6 out of 10

Is this really -- as I have categorised it -- science fiction? The blurb on the back calls it a "techno-thriller"... According to Macquarie dictionary, a thriller deals with crime (etc) "in an exciting or sensational manner." State of Fear certainly does that. Wikipedia references another website to state that, "A thriller is villain driven plot, whereby he presents obstacles the hero must overcome." With the added criteria that the hero, "must thwart the plans of more powerful and better equipped villains."

Yes, it's exciting. Yes, it's sensational. But there is no "hero"; the story revolves around a "protagonist", who barely knows what's going on and, mostly, just follows instructions from stronger characters. Speaking of whom... the villains are powerful and well equipped -- but the good guys are even more so! The good guys are able to call on money, technology and knowledge which, frankly, makes the villains look like second-rate wimps.

Loosely speaking, this book could be a "thriller". I prefer to label it as "action".

Then there's science fiction: "which draws imaginatively on scientific knowledge and speculation in its plot, setting, theme, etc" (Macquarie). With, as Wikipedia adds, "a considerable degree of suspension of disbelief", where the reader reads for enjoyment and does not question the science. (Although in "hard" science fiction the science should, at least, be plausible if viewed at some not-too-distant period into the future.)

State of Fear is definitely science fiction. The science is central to the plot and is backed by references to what I guess are actual, scientific papers. Though Crichton admits that some of the action -- guiding a storm, for example -- is still just a theory. So, yes, science fiction.

What the book really is, though, is a rant against environmental activists who exaggerate environmental threats. Exaggeration which includes the use of limited "evidence" to support their scare tactics.

Which is interesting, really. Since Crichton does exactly the same.

Science fiction...

Crichton presents, in this book, lots of references to "prove" his case. He makes no pretense at showing the range of arguments, for and against. "Here is," he says, "One paper which supports my view. Therefore... my view is right." Rubbish!

He also has some appalling lapses in logic:

In Appendix 1, Why Politicized Science is Dangerous -- the author's own argument, not just a part of a fictional novel -- Crichton discusses the way in which scientists follow politics. The scientists, apparently, follow political thought, even though no external pressure has been applied.

Crichton quotes from research which states that scientists in pre-World War 2 Germany had "adjusted their research interests" to suit Nazi policies, even though "no external pressure can be documented." Having stated that scientists voluntarily followed Nazi policies, Crichton then adds, "And those few who did not adjust disappeared."

"Disappeared"!? Why did they "disappear"?! Could it be, perhaps, that their non-compliance was noted -- and these scientists were forced to disappear? Were they, in fact, killed?

You are a scientist. A fellow scientist disagrees with Nazi policies. That fellow scientist "disappears" -- presumed dead. And Crichton does not see this as evidence of "external pressure" on scientists...

Crichton takes a point of view. States evidence that directly contradicts that point of view. And does not even recognise it.

Yes, State of Fear is a rant in science fiction format.

Unfortunately, the book is also half filled with various characters spouting Crichton's one-eyed views. Shades of Robert Heinlein!

... action packed adventure

Still, like Heinlein, Crichton can write an entertaining, action-packed, science fiction novel. The characters fly around the world, defeating villainous plots, getting in various degrees of danger, flying in the face of logic...

The protagonist deliberately leaves his bugged mobile phone in the villain's office. Later, he checks his messages. Later still, he switches his mobile back on, to catch up on what's been happening. All without ever getting his phone back from the villain's office!

The good guys finally manage to identify the location for the final confrontation. They make a last-minute dash to save the world (or California, at least). They battle cannibal rebels -- to demonstrate that the concept of "the noble savage" is entirely false. Having arrived on the spot with only two hours to spare -- they meet up with another good guy who had been there for more than a week! Why didn't he phone?!

Oh yes... Then, having battled the cannibals, wiped out the bad guys, destroyed all means of transport... the good guys apparently just walk back past the cannibals. There are three people carrying two others who are near-death, a journey which was apparently near-impossible, in full health, on the way out. A journey which is now so simple that it is not even worth a paragraph.

Switch off your logical faculties. Sit back, read, enjoy...

If only it were set off the Earth, I would have added the category, "space opera".


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Afterthought

This book is a lot of fun. Totally ridiculous action, but a lot of fun. Its problem is with the author's tone: a strong attack on "accepted" views of environmental threat. Crichton treats his own barely supported views as gospel. Widely accepted, opposing views are -- in his opinion -- unbelievably stupid and naive.

It is difficult to read this book without feeling either stupid or insulted.

Yet some of Crichton's espoused opinions are -- possibly -- sound. Why does he do his best to set the reader offside?

Let me suggest...

Why insult the reader? Why write a book with such a simplistic plot? Why throw in supposed solutions in just a few pages in the last chapter? Rather than being totally negative -- why not take a more positive view?

Crichton claims (in the last paragraph) that he knows all the answers to environmental problems. He took the easy approach and simply attacked every other idea. He could have set himself a real challenge -- and written a more readable book -- with a positive approach to his ideas of solutions...

In the final chapter, Crichton sets the protagonist and his partner a challenge, to run an effective environmental support group. Now that sounds like the basis for a good book: Set up the group, tackle a major environmental issue, face challenges -- and overcome them!

I compared Crichton to Heinlein. Crichton states his views, insults the reader and throws in a lot of unbelievable action. Heinlein states his views -- and has his characters implement them. If Crichton had done that he could have made his points -- very strongly -- and written a more enjoyable book.

Wednesday, April 28, 2010

Toilets of the World / Morna E Gregory & Sian James

Toilets of the World

category: travel, author:

Morna E Gregory & Sian James

published by Merrell, original copyright 2006, read in April 2010

Agamedes' opinion: 7 out of 10

First, there was The National Public Toilet Map, a convenient guide for those in need in Australia. (Convenient for those with an internet connection, anyway.) Then there was WorldToilet.info, a helpful explanation of how to use the various styles of toilets around the world. Now there's a picture book, Toilets of the World.

I've added the book to the "travel" category, because it places the toilets in continent (lmao) and country. Really, though, it's entertainment. And quite entertaining, too.

Dozens of toilets, ranging from the basic to the absurd. Photos of each toilet, highlighting its unique features -- and each toilet in this book is, somehow, unique. Plus humorous, interesting and sometimes informative text... Not too much text.

Each member of the family found something funny, amazing or at least interesting in this book. It won't make you think, Wow! I must check that out! But it will provide an enjoyable way to pass (rofl) an idle moment.


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Monday, April 26, 2010

Bosch Maxx Lifestyle / washing machine

Bosch Maxx Lifestyle

category: front loading washing machine, manufactured by:

Bosch

We bought a new front loading washing machine in late 2008.

Agamedes' opinion: 6 out of 10
(a combination of good wash with incomprehensible instructions)

After more than a year I am now happy that this washing machine does get clothes clean. No worries there -- now. For the first few months, I struggled.

First, it's a front loader. I'm tired of kneeling down, throwing something in, watching it fall out again. And -- the well known problem -- once you press Start, there is no going back. No changing your mind. No pause to add just one more item to the wash.

Next, it's supposed to be energy efficient. Also -- according to the woman at the customer service help desk -- it's water efficient: less load, less water. I've been recycling grey water, catching used water in the laundry tub. As far as I can tell, any size load uses just as much water. No water efficiency there... Is there any truth in the energy efficiency claim?

That same customer service lady told me to always leave empty space at the top of the washer; to not fill it "too full" of clothes. No mention of that in the instruction book. Which brings me to the instruction book.

Wash score 8, instructions 4

Here's how I think the instruction book was written:
  • A bunch of German Laundry Engineers put the washing machine through its paces. They all understood water circulation, detergent chemistry, the adhesive properties of various categories of dirt. Not one of them had ever washed a load of their own washing. Not one of them had ever watched "a real person" do a load of laundry.
  • These Laundry Engineers calculated the most efficient and effective ways of cycling water and detergent through clothes. Probably published several papers, in the Monthly Journal of Laundry Engineering.
  • They then documented the best wash cycles in a very compact and language-independent form. Failed to test their documentation standards on real people.
  • And totally failed to explain which cycle is most appropriate in which washing circumstance.
Right from the word go, the Bosch washing machine instructions fail every test of suitability for purpose. The rest of this post is an example, from my my3Rs blog, of how not to write an instruction manual (Poor Literacy a Hazard).

Bosch botches laundry manual

The cover page says, "Read these instructions before switching on the washing machine! Also follow the separate installation instructions. Follow the safety instructions on page 11!" So I need to read these twelve pages. Plus the separate and missing installation instructions. And the best place to start appears to be on page 11.

So I start with the safety instructions on page 11...

Most of it seems fairly standard: Some pointers on safe use of an electrical appliance; warning of the risk of posioning (sic) from detergents; an instruction to not climb on the washing machine. I'm a bit worried by the warning, "Caution when draining hot detergent solution." I use cold and dry powder. Where is this dangerous "hot detergent solution"?!

I skip back to page 9: Detergent-solution pump. This tells me how to drain a "Detergent-solution pump". What?! What is a "Detergent-solution pump"? When would I drain it? Why would I drain it... whatever it is?! Whatever it is, it does seem to introduce a "Risk of scalding!" -- which is a new risk, not mentioned in the Safety instructions of page 11.

Oh well, back to page 11. "Risk of explosion"... Perhaps I should avoid using this machine. It seems to be very dangerous. Specially since I have not been properly trained in its use.

Ah... forget it... Let's just follow the instructions for use...

Page 2: Your washing machine

"Congratulations..." Okay, I made a good choice. Must have, the instructions tell me so.

"Environmental disposal: Dispose of packaging in an environmentally friendly manner" -- with a picture of a wheelie bin -- with a big X through it. What? Do not put the packaging in the bin? What am I supposed to do, dump it on a vacant block?

Okay, ignore that, too. Let's see how to wash clothes with this washing machine...

"Programmes". This looks good. It's a list of all the pre-set combinations of wash/soak/rinse/spin cycles. Yes, a list... with instructions to "see Page 7" for a detailed overview. (By the way, this short list of programmes is split across pages 1 and 2. Just for your reading inconvenience.) So, I turn to page 7.

The first line of page 7 says, "See also page 6".

Page 6 is "Important information". Including -- the second section -- "Before washing for the first time".

Enough!

I close the instruction manual. Shove in some dirty clothes. Click the selector knob to "Mixed load". Put laundry detergent into one of the three possible spaces (hoping that I picked the right one) and press go... (Actually, it's worse than that because the "go" button is touch sensitive. Sometimes it ignores the touch. Sometimes it flicks on and off several times, if it's feeling really sensitive. But that's another issue.)

Then I walk away and hope for the best. And start to read War And Peace, because it's much clearer than the instruction manual, and makes a lot more sense.

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Thursday, April 22, 2010

Prador Moon / Neal Asher

Prador Moon

category: science fiction, author:

Neal Asher

book 1 in the Polity Universe
published by Tor, original copyright 2006, read in April 2010

Agamedes' opinion: 8 out of 10

That's not "8 out of 10" because the book is great. Rather, it's great fun. As long as you have no problems with extreme violence.

On the other hand, (a) the violence is so extreme, so over-the-top, so unbelievable, that it does not have a personal impact on the reader, and (b) the violence happens to people or creatures with whom (or with which) we have not had time to develop any sympathies. It's all fast and furious -- and nasty -- but somewhat remote from our own emotions.

That said, the violence can also be satisfying. For example... A villain is preparing to leap on a hero, kill him, escape to wreak further havoc. The hero is far too well prepared, far too quick, and thumps the villain into submission. Take that! you alien-loving evil villain! Yes, it's good versus bad, everyone suffers, but in the long run baddies just don't stand a chance.

What else can I say? McGyver using extremely high tech? Captain Kirk duking it out -- using ray guns, rail guns, limpet mines -- with clawed alien crab-beasts? All with a clear plot leading -- via human heroics, AI determination, high tech invention -- to the final destruction of the major alien threat.

If you enjoyed the despairing view of humanity, the examination of childhood trauma leading to adult misery, the final moral decision left to the reader, of Oryx and Crake -- then Prador Moon is something entirely different!


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