Short Story 101: Proof of the Non-Existence of God

Proof of the Non-Existence of God

category: Short Story 101, author:

Agamedes

Here's a bit of fun: the first 101 words of a short story. Where is it going? What's going to happen? After just 101 words -- do you care?

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It had been a great day, a marvellous day, a day of amazement and inspiration. Arthur Pursnitz was feeling on top of the world. More than that: Arthur knew that he really was on top of an entire solar system... It may have been a model solar system – but what a model it was!

"What you see here is an absolutely perfect model, a model of our entire solar system," he told his group of guests.

Arthur watched the group. Many of them were staring wide-eyed, first at Arthur then at the model. It was difficult to comprehend the absolute perfection...

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