Showing posts with label author:modesitt. Show all posts
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Tuesday, July 31, 2012

Empire & Ecolitan / L.E.Modesitt Jr

Empire & Ecolitan

category: Science fiction, author:

L.E.Modesitt Jr

books  2 & 3 of Galactic Empire
original copyright 1989, 1990

read in July 2012

Agamedes' opinion: 6 out of 10, read to pass the time


Two books in one volume. Value for money :-)  Both novels are... okay.

 First up is The Ecolitan Operation. Old style space opera. Unbelievable but fun. With some environmental overtones: could an ecologically sound culture really be that good?!

 Large scale death and destruction, cardboard characters, problems solved with fist or ray gun. All that is asked of the reader is, a willing suspension of disbelief.

 Immediately following that action-packed adventure is The Ecologic Secession.

 The second book aims for less flash and more depth. It does not work very well.

 The romance is... well, what can I say...? Stilted? Just short of embarrassing? A worthy attempt but not great.

 The political dithering is realistic, on both sides of the secession. The flow of the book is more complex ( than Operation) and it works. I would say, an author improving his technical skills. And attempting to improve the quality of his story.

I enjoyed both of these books. But would not go out of my way to read more.


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Wednesday, July 11, 2012

Imager / L.E. Modesitt Jr


Imager

category: fantasy, author:

L.E. Modesitt Jr

book 1 of the Imager Portfolio
original copyright 2009

read in July 2012 

Agamedes' opinion: 6 out of 10, read to pass the time


Tedious.

Exceedingly tedious.

Imager is an introduction to a series. It may be a fascinating series. As a book, this one is boring.

Young man becomes an apprentice artist. Passes ten years between chapters. Spends the rest of the book learning to be an imager, a magician.

We are given full details of every lesson. Every conversation. Every... single... boring... meal.

Half way through this book I thought, Why are we told what is eaten at every single meal? Why are we told what clothes the hero wears? What clothes his girlfriend wears? I see several possibilities.

Perhaps Modesitt is being paid by the word. Perhaps he has a well-imagined world but no plot, so he describes the world. Perhaps -- and I give this possibility the highest probability -- perhaps Modesitt has been told that lots of women are reading fantasy series. So, he thinks, Keep the women happy by detailing every meal and every costume...

Does it work? Do food and clothes attract the female reader? I don't know. Perhaps a female reader could tell me.

In between lessons and meals and descriptions of clothes, the hero is the target of assassins. As far as I can tell, there are three groups of assassins out to kill him.

One group seems to be linked to some people that the hero killed. As far as I can tell, it's not the killing which upset them. No worries, someone else has already killed that lot. Or at least scared them away.

They were scared away by the second lot. The second lot are believed to have a long-term grudge against the hero. Sometime in the future... in a far distant book, perhaps... the hero expects that this group will punish him severely. His evidence? Well, they killed the people who wanted him dead, didn't they?!

Then there's the third lot of killers... Who seem to be part of international attempts to destabilise the hero's country. This group randomly kill beginner imagers, those who don't know enough to defend themselves. When the hero proves hard to kill -- they just keep on trying!

Meanwhile, the hero is learning his magical tricks. Naturally enough, he is the best imager for hundreds of years. On top of this, he has the unexplained and unrelated Guesswork Superpower: when he guesses that the baddies are hidden behind the garden wall -- he is always right...

Okay, so it's an interesting world. The many dozens of characters are mostly cardboard. The hero is food- and clothing-fixated but otherwise acceptable. It makes for an interesting chapter one.

But a whole book? With so much scene-setting, so much explanatory conversation... so little actually happening!?  No way.

Light.  Wordy. Tedious.


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